It seems a bit unsharp. Not a bad portrait, I think the cut hair on the right looks not very well. Her expression - avarage. +6/10

beautiful pose!

beautiful model and beautiful portrait, it's unsharp indeed but still beautiful

A little more DOF would be nice....maybe resizing problems...
But she is a beautiful lady.....tender and elegant....I love the look on her eyes!
Carlos
And maybe the old clasic rule for portraits would work better.....Double the focal lenght of the normal....about 100 mm for "35 mmm" (Normal 50) and for a view camera 4 by 5..... 300mm (Normal 150)...that renders a bettter perspective of the fatial features.
Carlos

nice shot, it's grainy and the head is wya too unproportional to the rest of the body, the pose is a lso a bit strained, i don't think she was relaxed enough with her pose, the facial position is a little winced, nice try

overall nice work

nice portrait ...i would just recommend more bacground light so the face and hair could come out of it more
+8

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perfect image ...

Beautiful lady.

+9